Consultation 1

Consultation 1 - 23/4/2010

I had my first consultation with wahidah on my chosen idea. I wrote out the whole storyline of my idea and consulted with wahidah on how my story flowed. I also explained how some of my shots will be like and how does the entire scene look. The problem identified for the story was my character profile did not build up well, thus causing confused to the audience. The ending was not strong enough to attract the audience too.

After the consultation, i decided to change part of my story especially on the front part when i can used it to build up my character, examples what caused him to obsess with jigsaw puzzle, the background and history of the character had to be included. The ending had to be change in the way that the story will became more suspense and exciting.

That's my first consultation on Project three.